Focusing your words to sell

Are your sales words focusing on the right person?

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OK, informational snip-its over, now on to the main feature…

Is your sales copy focusing on the right person?

The weak link I see for many companies is there sales copy or lack there of. Over and over I see people trying to sell a horse or a horse product with only one line of info. Now I can see understand this when you are paying for each word like with a news paper classified ad, but I see ad after ad online with only one or two sentences of description. Come on would even consider buying a product knowing so little about it?

You need to spend more time writing, yes, horrors WRITING. But just a bunch of words will not make sales either. You have to give people the info they need in a way they can understand it and in a way that shows them what is in it for them. The focus has to be on the customer, not just on you and your product.

Yes, this is work and it looks like most people are too afraid of doing it wrong that they don’t do it at all. Well you will only get better at it with practice so the sooner you start the better.

I found a Customer Focus Calculator – a We We Monitor. You can run your web page through it or your sales copy for your business brochure.

It also has a great article to read ‘It’s the Customer, Stupid’

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